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Bird Commission

Published: Sep 20, 2013

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This is a commission for a relative of mine! She wanted a bird with colors to match her table set... I'm a little worried I made the bird too orange, though.
I've certainly gotten better at drawing trees since my last attempt, which I refuse to post to the internet. _{It looked awful.}

Anyways, hope you like!

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3300x4200px 5.78 MB

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MabusTheDark

Sep 20, 2013

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Hello there! I'm happy to provide you with a Critique today.

I was serious when I said I'd love to Critique your stuff! Please feel free to ask me for a Critique any time in the future... I don't bite. Now, for the details!

The colors here are very well-done on this piece, with good shading where the sun should be, according to the lighting you also used. The style of this is a bit anime, but not so much that it takes over your unique style. And despite your stressing over the trees, I think they look perfectly fine.

Depending on what you're going for, I would suggest more detailing on the trees, personally. They look nice as they are, so maybe it wouldn't be needed much.

Other than what I mentioned, this is a lovely commission! I'll be sure to try to do some Critiques for you in the future.